KB: A coworker of my dad’s gave me a documentary for girls to comment on when I was 11. She’s on set with him today observing today and brought the below. He took a photo and sent to me and my mom. Prepare to make fun of me forever. Also, I was not good at grammar then.
Kate: AMAZING. Caps necessary and intended.
Amulya: AHAHAHAHAH. Dying. I love how your whole review is just suggestions for what things they SHOULD have added. Esp. your invention of the proverb “you can do anything if your heart LEADS YOU TO IT”, aka hopefully you get lucky and your heart decides to lead you in the right direction, bitch.
Also wow how did you end up basically illiterate at age 11?
KB: I was NOT illiterate. RUDE!
Long-form writing was not a strength apparently. 11 year olds write in lists. Or at least I did when 11.
It was a review. I was very a critical thinker from a young age.
KB: But in seriousness, I was terrible at using transitions until high school. I struggled with them in a big way in middle school.
Amulya: Also please tell me the violent scrawl at the bottom is your signature
KB: It can’t be.
I do appreciate that the core principles I still agree with.